My bedroom-draft1
My bedroom is a bright place. When you enter my room, you first can see the window in frond of you. Below the window, there is circle table, and there is settee behind it. My bed is on the right wall and lined with bed, desk, and computer. My closet is in the left corner beside bookcase. I think my bedroom is pretty clean and comfortable.
posted by Samantha＊霓∥ @ 7:25 PM
7 Comments:
you first can see the window in frond of you=>first 是不是要放在後面比較順呢!
Bookcase=>前面要加冠詞
1.in frond of you打錯了
2.應該是a bookcase
you first can see the window "in frond of you".
是in front of you
there is circle table=>there is "a" circle table
there is settee behind it=>there is "a" settee behind it
My closet is in the left corner beside bookcase.=>My closet is in the left corner and it is beside the bookcase.我覺得這樣比較好啦!!你參考一下
you first can see the window 我覺得first you can see .......
there is circle table there is settee behind it加a
應該是first you can see....
in frond of =>in front of
1.there is "a" circle table，下面的settee 也是一樣
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