2/12 The fresh air of Country
Today I went to 六甲 with my classmates. We took train to Penny’s home which is in the country. When we arrived there, Penny already prepared pork, bacon, sprays, and vegetables for us to girll. There are a small river for farmer to irrigate. We were not a farmer, but we were a dabbler! We sat beside the river and played cards. Surely, we also ate the meat when we played cards. It was so interesting that I never have. Then we took picture with the country view and Penny’s grandfather. Certainly, I had ever live in 官田鄉 which is next to 六甲鄉 when I was a kid. Those country view made me recalled many things from my childhood and let me felt very comfortable. How nice today it was. I hope I can come back more often and enjoy the fresh air from the nature.

7 Comments:
1.There are a small river 用is
2.We sat beside the river and played cards. Surely, we also ate the meat when we played cards.可以用關代要不然有重複感
3.It was so interesting that I never have. 我覺得that I have never had 畢竟是從以前到現在YOu know that.
4. I had ever live 要用p.p
5.Those country view made me recalled many things 我想made 後面要用原形
6.let me felt 要用原形
Penny already prepared pork, bacon, sprays, and vegetables for us to "girll". 我找不到這個字欸!是不是錯了?
"grill"拼錯了…
六甲好哇!是個好鄉好水好人多的地方!
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girll>>>grill
烤肉
不好意思...
1..Penny "has" already prepared pork, bacon, sprays, and vegetables for us to girll.
2..去六甲阿!真好!!可以享受大自然的空氣!!不錯不錯!!
There "are" a small river for farmer to irrigate.→is
There "are" a small river for->were
"We" were not "a farmer"/"we" were "a dabbler">好像有點矛盾ㄟ
I had ever "live" in 官田鄉->lived
made me "recalled"->使役動詞喔!
"let" me "felt"->加原形動詞喔
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