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School Life
I always have a busy school life. Since I am a senior high school student I’m expected that I will enter a university in the future. Besides, the test of the university is a keen competition. Therefore I’m forced to study day and night. Everyday, the schoolwork’s high pressure for me is a kind of burden. That’s why I am busy not only in the school but also at home. Moreover, I’m forced to give up my interesting extracurricular activities. I hope I can lead a colorful life in my senior high school.
Computer
The computers play an important role in our life. They can help students hand in their homework and people can send information in time. As long as you turn on the computers, you surly fall in love with it. However, you must be sure to remind yourselves that don’t to stay in front of the computers too long. Most of parents don’t like their children depend on the computers too much. Especially dicusstion of the bulletin board system is too waste time.
posted by Samantha＊霓∥ @ 8:50 PM
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Since I am a senior high school student I’m expected that I will enter a university in the future.中間沒有句點耶！
1.Since I am a senior high school student I’m expected that I will enter a university in the future. 用since的話我覺得用完成式比較好
２． Besides, the test of the university is a keen competition入學測驗是entrance exam
3.Therefore I’m forced to study day and night.我覺得therefore後面加逗點而且study 那邊用完成式
４．Everyday, the schoolwork’s high pressure for me is a kind of burden.我覺得every day要分開要不然是形容詞
５． I’m forced to give up my interesting extracurricular activities我覺得用過去式比較好畢竟已經放棄了
1.The computers 應該不用the
2.don’t to stay 怎麼會有to阿
1.Everyday 連在一起是adj.分開才是adv.喔！
2. you surly fall in love with it. 我覺得加will比較順
3.don’t "to" stay in front of the computers too long to要刪掉
3.Especially dicusstion of the bulletin board system is too waste time.
especially 要加逗號，用discussing當主詞比較好，discussing on BBS wastes much time
1.The computers play an important role in our life我覺得那個computers play 感覺很奇怪不了那個意思
2.They can help students hand in their homework 不了意思，為什麼要幫他們的手
3.that don’t to stay in front of the computers too long我覺得don't 後面不用加to 吧，你的意思應該是不要在電腦前面待太久吧
4.Especially dicusstion of the bulletin board system is too waste time副詞especially後面要逗點
歹勢啊！especially 後面好像不用加逗點
1..Therefore I’m forced to study day and night.->therefore後面要加逗號唷
2..Since I am a senior high school student I’m expected that I will enter a university in the future.->中加要斷句吧!!加個逗號唄!
don’t "to" stay in front of the computers too long
應該不用to吧@@
Therefore I’m forced to study day and night. Everyday
therefore後面要，唷
時態怪怪
hand in homework那句的快速的沒翻
turn on the computers部會用it
Most of parents don’t like their children depend on the
of 可省
like+ving or to v
Especially 家豆號
since 應該要用完成式吧!!
therefore 要加逗號
As long as you turn on the computers,"and" you surly fall in love with it.
The schoolwork’s high pressure for me is a kind of burden every day.
Therefore後面要加逗點。
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