Autobiography -draft1(part2)
Nowadays, I major in English after the Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools. However, I have been hated English when I was an elementary school student. Not understand how important English was, I didn’t pay any attention to it till I entered junior high school. I met my class teacher which was changing my view of English. Therefore, I could be a part of Department of Applied Foreign Languages-2B. I really appreciate that I can join this big family, with strong united and optimistic attitude. We always won the first prize in many activities like volleyball games and sport competitions. Besides, we took part in national English drama in National Yunlin University of Science & Technology. Fortunately, we got the fifth prize in that competition. For this competition, we paid a lot of energy and made many efforts. And my work was the stage setting. Because of my gift of art, my classmates recommended me to take the responsibility of the main stage setting. It was my pleasure to do this work, which made I understood teamwork is the point of success. I got lots of valuable experiences from those courses.
In the near future, I will attend the GEPT and Toeic. Moreover, I hope I can be more patient for learning new things and study harder and harder. The most important is strengthening my English ability because the more English I learn the better future it will be. In order to make my dream come true, I will try my best.

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1.However, I have been hated English when I was an elementary school student.
我覺得been可以去掉
2.Not "understanding" how important English was…
3.We always "win" the first prize in many activities like volleyball games and sport competitions.用現在式感覺比較順
4.which made "me" "understand" teamwork is the point of success.
5. the more English I learn "," the better future it will be.
which made I understood teamwork應該是me
"Not understand how important English was, I didn’t pay any attention to it till I entered junior high school."應該是"understanding" :]
The most important is strengthening my English ability because the more English I learn the better future it will be.
because前面,比較好
1..join "in"the big family->應該吧!
2.. which made "I" "understood" teamwork is the point of success->me;understand
1.I met my class teacher which was changing my view of English.
改成I met my homeroom teacher who changed my view about English
2.which made I understood teamwork is the point of success.那個made後面的understand要用原形
3.The most important is strengthening my English ability 那個strengthening用to strengthen
pay "any" attention->much我覺得比較好ㄟ...
Not "understanding"...
view "of" English->on or about
We always "won"->win
made(使役動詞) "I" "understood"(原V)->me understand
patient "for" learning new things and "study" harder and harder->with
studying
which made "I" understood->me
I really appreciate that I can join this big family, with strong united and optimistic 逗號步用
For this competition, we paid a lot of energy and made many efforts. And my work was the stage setting And my..可以不用寫
valuable experience
because the more English I learn the better future it will be
改依下,其他的他們挑出來了
Good!your skill is better
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