Samantha 甄霓

Wednesday, June 13, 2007

Making decision -draft1

Growing up means making my won decisions. I can choose what I want to do and have my own ideas for some situations. However, being an adult means that I can not only have my own decisions but also have responsibility for what I do. Especially, in law, I need to realize what I can do and can’t do. Therefore, making a good decision is essential. Because of all my choices will affect my future.

The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing which subject that I plan to major.
In the first grade of senior high, I had never thought about it. By and by, I became the second grader and school asked us to make out our decision of the subject we want to major in. At first, in order to learn more knowledge, I wanted to take commercial courses. However, I found that I wasn’t interested in commercial. On the contrary, English appealed to me even if I wasn’t good at it. Therefore, I chose Department of Applied Foreign Language to major in. Understanding the price I paid, I will try my best to learn English and take charge of my own choice.

9 Comments:

Blogger Celia said...

....which subject that I "plan" to major.

應該用過去式"planned"。

6:11 AM  
Blogger FawnYma said...

1.was choosing which subject that I "planed" to major.

6:30 AM  
Blogger Butterfly said...

1.choosing which subject that I plan to major.
我不知道這邊的major後面要不要加in

5:50 AM  
Blogger 許雅婷 said...

1.making my won decisions那個won打錯字了
2.which subject that I plan to major應該要加in

4:53 AM  
Blogger Ryuka(暐) said...

Growing up means making my won decisions
不是won是own

5:14 AM  
Blogger 傻咩 said...

my "won" decisions打錯了喔~
(in)which subject that I plan to major.

7:27 AM  
Blogger 梁宜靜 said...

my "won" decisions->own
that I "plan" to major->planned

7:32 AM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

Because of all my choices will affect my future.

Because all my....
beause of +n


The hardest decision that I ever made was choosing
the hardest decision that I ever made was to choose

By and by, I became the second grader ,and school asked us to make out our ...

你是說選商業類還是英文組吧寫的
有點不太清楚

後面的分詞構句 好

7:50 PM  
Blogger Tina said...

my "own" decisions
that I "planned" to major

7:52 PM  

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