Samantha 甄霓

Friday, October 05, 2007

A Forgettable Experience-draft1

Once I attended a wedding which was held by m relative. It took place at a church, and all of my families were present for that important ceremony. After the guests were seated, the bride trod slowly and gracefully, smiling at the groom, who waited in front of her. Because it was my first time to be a bridesmaid, I followed her nervously. All the guests held their breath and focused on her. I felt really happy and pleased, because that was the moment she found her true happiness after the divorce with my father 7 years later. I thought the wedding was the memory that I would never forget in my life.

8 Comments:

Blogger Ryuka(暐) said...

是by "my" relative

present for你如果是要寫出席的話應該是present "at"

11:54 PM  
Blogger FawnYma said...

1.Once I attended a wedding which was held by "my" relative.
2.were present "at"
3.with my father 7 years later
later?蝦米意思? Beats me!

6:26 AM  
Blogger 許雅婷 said...

m relative是my relative

7:37 AM  
Blogger 梁宜靜 said...

m relative->my relative

7:43 AM  
Blogger 傻咩 said...

"m" relative->my
after the divorce with my father 7 years "later".後面不用later八@@
恩恩~~我懂我懂~~

8:25 AM  
Blogger Celia said...

Once I attended a wedding which was held by m relative. It took place at a church, and all of my families were "present for" that important ceremony.介系詞應該用at才是出席的意思。

11:11 PM  
Blogger Tina said...

"my" relative
present "at"

5:36 AM  
Blogger Butterfly said...

1.感覺沒什麼大錯啦,還不錯

7:59 AM  

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